New listing needs confirming

[Cushtydeals]

Hi everybody.
I have just made a new listing and would like for you to take a look and check that it is ok and not against ebids policy anywhere.

http://uk.ebid.net/for-sale/caravan-...-120210970.htm

If this is ok I will be using the same template for other listings.

[cheaver]

Hi everybody.
I have just made a new listing and would like for you to take a look and check that it is ok and not against ebids policy anywhere.

http://uk.ebid.net/for-sale/caravan-...-120210970.htm

If this is ok I will be using the same template for other listings.

The only people who can confirm whether or not your ad complies with eBid policy are Support in eBid surely? Forum members cannot do that.

However, if it is helpful here is my take on it (hoping it helps) : the Title of the Ad is one thing (caravan rental) , the heading in the Description area is totally different & appears to be advertising a Caravan Hire company....

Just my thoughts for what they are worth!


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[Cushtydeals]

"The only people who can confirm whether or not your ad complies with eBid policy are Support in eBid surely?"

That was my thought last August when they okayed my first listing.
That was before they removed it in October.

That's why I thought ask the forum members for their take on the new listing template.

The title I thought was ok.
but I am open to suggestions

Looking at it states what it is. Ingoldmells Caravan Hire

Could change it round to read Caravan Hire at Imgoldmells
My thought on the Ingoldmells first would be favourite for Google search

[cheaver]

The title I thought was ok.
but I am open to suggestions

OK. I think the title is ok too - it is a different one to your other listing so it obviously isn't a duplicate listing.

The implied advertising of a Caravan Hire Company/Site in the description area is, in my opinion, liable to criticism. Why not have the description begin with what it is you are actually selling? (as in the title). Just my take on it.

[Cushtydeals]

Changed the description title to read

Caravan Hire at Ingoldmells

Does that look better

[cheaver]

Changed the description title to read

Does that look better

Much! (IMO) BUT the pic still advertises something else lol!

[Cushtydeals]

Ahh I think I know what you mean now.
The picture is of Fantasy Island Theme Park taken from my caravan window.

The Ingoldmells Caravan Hire is the title of the website it is on
Actually good point it might be worth putting "view from caravan window underneath it"

[Cushtydeals]

Done I think were getting there

[cheaver]

The Ingoldmells Caravan Hire is the title of the website it is on

Exactly.... and it is that which I think should not be there. The extra pic in your description area promotes a Company/Website does it not? & is therefore questionnable. (again, JMO & not something I would do). A listing, to my understanding, should promote the actual item itself for sale & nothing else outside of it & certainly not a 3rd party.

[cheaver]

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I think the picture in your description should be edited to the view only and not a named Company/Site/Website: